{"id":11738,"date":"2026-09-10T05:03:23","date_gmt":"2026-09-10T03:03:23","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.brokenmount.com\/bm\/2026\/09\/10\/what-to-do-when-your-brain-keeps-handing-you-the-wrong-script\/"},"modified":"2026-09-10T05:03:23","modified_gmt":"2026-09-10T03:03:23","slug":"what-to-do-when-your-brain-keeps-handing-you-the-wrong-script","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.brokenmount.com\/bm\/2026\/09\/10\/what-to-do-when-your-brain-keeps-handing-you-the-wrong-script\/","title":{"rendered":"What to Do When Your Brain Keeps Handing You the Wrong Script"},"content":{"rendered":"<div><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/nofilmschool.com\/media-library\/gavin-gaitan.png?id=67740459&amp;width=1245&amp;height=700&amp;coordinates=0%2C59%2C0%2C59\"><\/p>\n<p>Gavin Gaitan (who <a href=\"https:\/\/nofilmschool.com\/make-first-feature-anthology\" target=\"_self\"><u>we&#8217;ve written about before<\/u><\/a>) is a Los Angeles writer\/producer\/director with three self-financed features to his name. His most recent, <a href=\"https:\/\/www.thedowntownmovie.com\/\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\" target=\"_blank\"><u><em>Down Town<\/em><\/u><\/a>, is a 24-hour absurdist crime comedy set in downtown Los Angeles. (It won <a href=\"https:\/\/shermanoaksfilmfestival.com\/2024\/10\/16\/down-town\/\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\" target=\"_blank\"><u>Best in Fest at Sherman Oaks 2024<\/u><\/a> and is now streaming on Prime Video.)<\/p>\n<p>To be honest, Gaitan talks like someone who just finished a feature and is still bruised from it, which makes sense because it&#8217;s really hard. Before you get to set, the writing is hard, too, another thing he talks about here. There&#8217;s getting over roadblocks and trying to craft the strongest draft you can, even when notes don&#8217;t make sense. Also, learn why he needs four uninterrupted hours to write 21 minutes&#8217; worth of material.<\/p>\n<p>His answers about feedback, writing routines, and the tangent-script that saved him from a stagnant week lead to advice more useful than the usual writing platitudes.<\/p>\n<p>Check out the conversation below.<\/p>\n<p class=\"shortcode-media shortcode-media-youtube\"> <span class=\"rm-shortcode\" data-rm-shortcode-id=\"a1393b7d5c83d7226b4c9028f44a86f2\" style=\"display:block;position:relative;padding-top:56.25%;\"><iframe loading=\"lazy\" frameborder=\"0\" height=\"auto\" lazy-loadable=\"true\" scrolling=\"no\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/3wLrIe11iTM?rel=0\" style=\"position:absolute;top:0;left:0;width:100%;height:100%;\" width=\"100%\"><\/iframe><\/span> <small class=\"image-media media-caption\" placeholder=\"Add Photo Caption...\">&#8211; YouTube<\/small> <small class=\"image-media media-photo-credit\" placeholder=\"Add Photo Credit...\"> <a href=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=3wLrIe11iTM\" target=\"_blank\">www.youtube.com<\/a> <\/small> <\/p>\n<h2>Follow the Tangent<\/h2>\n<p>There will probably be times when you&#8217;re on assignment. You take a writing gig, and you&#8217;re hopefully excited about it.<\/p>\n<p>But in other cases, when an assignment is totally self-imposed, there&#8217;s no reason to stick with something if it&#8217;s not flowing. In Gaitan&#8217;s case, he was trying to break a new comedy script, spent a week getting nowhere, and had a completely different idea nagging at him the whole time.<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>&#8220;I was trying to write a new action comedy, and I spent a week just biting my knuckle, thinking I just had nothing. I was coming up with a couple of scenes, an idea for a character. I was just spending hours just kind of trying to brainstorm this thing, but it wasn&#8217;t clicking then. But the whole time I had this other idea for an erotic thriller, an entirely different film that kept popping up in my mind for some reason, and I kept being like, &#8216;Go away, go away. I&#8217;m trying to write this action comedy right now. I don&#8217;t have time for you.&#8217; And then, after a week, I barely had an outline, and I was like, &#8216;Okay, let me start. Let me just get a couple of these other notes down from this erotic thriller that&#8217;s like been bothering me.&#8217; And then, pen to paper, six weeks later, I have a full feature for that thing.&#8221;<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>One thing writers often beat themselves up about is grinding on something that seemingly goes nowhere. But even if you write the first act of a script that you never finish, that&#8217;s still a workout for your writing muscles. You wouldn&#8217;t say, &#8220;Oh, I only walked one mile, not five, so I didn&#8217;t exercise.&#8221; Because you did.<\/p>\n<p>For Gaitan, sitting at the desk was what made room for the other script to arrive.<\/p>\n<p>This ties into <a href=\"https:\/\/nofilmschool.com\/beat-creative-block\" target=\"_self\"><u>the Zeigarnik effect<\/u><\/a>, where your subconscious keeps grinding on unfinished business even after you&#8217;ve stepped away. The trick I covered before is that when you hit a wall, stop that scene and just keep moving.<\/p>\n<p>Gaitan&#8217;s version is bigger, obviously. The action comedy wasn&#8217;t ready, and his subconscious was telling him so by handing him a completely different movie every time he tried to concentrate.<\/p>\n<p>If you&#8217;re stuck and feel like you don&#8217;t have a nagging second idea, we&#8217;ve also put together <a href=\"https:\/\/nofilmschool.com\/prompts-and-exercises-writers-block\" target=\"_self\"><u>100 prompts and exercises designed to break a block<\/u><\/a>.<\/p>\n<h2>Whose Feedback Matters?<\/h2>\n<p>I recently found myself in a notes session I didn&#8217;t know was going to be a notes session. I was meeting actors who had a couple of questions, and it turned into something else. And that&#8217;s totally fine. You take out your laptop, you take the notes. Then you filter what&#8217;s useful later.<\/p>\n<p>For Gaitan, taste matters when he&#8217;s getting feedback.<\/p>\n<p>&#8220;If I think you&#8217;ve got really extraordinary taste in music and you&#8217;re really intelligent when it comes to perceiving art, and we align, then your feedback is going to be incredibly valuable to me. If you read it and you&#8217;re just like, &#8216;I just don&#8217;t really like these kinds of movies.&#8217; Okay. Irrelevant. You know, I don&#8217;t care really what you think. You&#8217;re not really my audience.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>You&#8217;ll run into that plenty. Hopefully a reader can still be objective even if they don&#8217;t operate in your genre. But if the notes don&#8217;t vibe with your goals, it&#8217;s okay to disregard. Either way, look for the <a href=\"https:\/\/nofilmschool.com\/note-behind-the-note\" target=\"_self\"><u>note behind the note<\/u><\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>And even if you might not initially agree, try to see where a note might have value, and interpret it in your own way.<\/p>\n<p>Gaitan tells a story about coming off a difficult drama, and how he wanted <em>Down Town<\/em> to be pure absurdist comedy, with no emotional throughline. His early readers didn&#8217;t get it and pushed him.<\/p>\n<p>&#8220;I don&#8217;t want you to care about these characters,&#8221; he said at first. &#8220;This thing&#8217;s just funny. Just gags every 90 seconds. Just something absurd happens. I gave the script to people, and they were like, &#8216;This is interesting. You&#8217;ve got to have some kind of story here to tell characters that I actually want to watch for 90 minutes.'&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>Even though it wasn&#8217;t what he set out to do at first, he added some drama, he said, &#8220;as an afterthought.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>&#8220;But then when I finished the film, people were coming up to me, and they were like, &#8216;Oh my god, that dramatic scene, it hit so hard. It was so powerful, so profound.&#8217; And I&#8217;m like, &#8216;What? Really?'&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>Your resistance to a note is not evidence the note is wrong. Sometimes you have to hear hard things about your work and figure out how to make it even just a little bit better.<\/p>\n<h2>Write for Four Hours<\/h2>\n<p>Writing is hard and takes enormous dedication.<\/p>\n<p>Gaitan will set an arbitrary deadline\u2026 then find a reason to skip it. Monday becomes Tuesday because of an appointment. Tuesday becomes the weekend. The weekend becomes next Monday, and now a full week is gone. Every screenwriter knows the feeling.<\/p>\n<p>He fixes the problem by blocking off time.<\/p>\n<p>&#8220;I need, like, four hours. I need four hours straight. Sometimes I&#8217;ll do an hour, and then maybe I&#8217;ll like give up because I really am not getting anything. But I need a four-hour space where I sit at my desk, don&#8217;t get up, don&#8217;t do anything. Just like sit there, and that&#8217;s four hours. That might be 21 minutes of writing, you know, over the course of four whole hours.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>You don&#8217;t win on output. Four hours and 21 productive minutes might mean one page or 10 pages. Showing up matters and builds the habit. Check out <a href=\"https:\/\/nofilmschool.com\/2013\/10\/6-habits-successful-screen-writers\" target=\"_self\"><u>six more habits of successful writers<\/u><\/a>.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<p>Author: Jo Light<br \/>\nThis article comes from <i>No Film School<\/i> and can be <a href=\"https:\/\/nofilmschool.com\/four-hour-writing-block-gaitan\" target=\"_blank\"><b>read on the original site.<\/b><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Gavin Gaitan (who we&#8217;ve written about before) is a Los Angeles writer\/producer\/director with three self-financed features to his name. 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